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K is for "Kurodo Akabane"

Journal Entry: Mon Feb 28, 2011, 12:02 AM
Today's letter is K! For Kurodo Akabane!

Also known as Dr Jackal, from Getbackers! :la:

…What’s my problem with psychotic doctors? ^^;

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It took me a while to find something to feature for letter "K"... until I thought it was a shame I couldn't feature Akabane anywhere on the list (A, J and G (for Akabane, Jackal and Getbackers) were already taken), and suddenly realised he could be the "K" because of his surname.

And now I'm going to borrow this meme from :iconartoveli:'s journal [link] because I'm actually a bit worried about Fati, Obscura's main character.

Mary-Sue/Gary Stu Meme

Fati:

[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[ ] They are physically strong.
[/] They have a rare hair/fur color (it's a weird feather color for our standards, but she meets a lot of people with the same color)
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual color
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change color
[ ] They have wings
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[ ] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[x] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents
[ ] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[x] They never knew their parents (raised by her brother)
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[ ] They are currently in a relationship
[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[x] They have a mental disorder
[x] They have an emotional disorder
[x] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[ ] They are very intelligent
[x] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[x] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet (Mephilo, her imaginary friend)
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name (Fati is a ridiculous nickname of sorts, she doesn't know her real name and keeps this one for convenience)
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstice etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[x] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[x] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives (actually she still lives on the streets)
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[x] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[x] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly (linked with her disorders)
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)
[x] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear (well it's difficult to have a lot of clothes when you keep travelling from town to town)
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia

Overall points: 12

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[ ] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[x] They do not care much about others (except maybe about her brother but she stills leaves him behind at some point)
[ ] They are emotionless

Point Reductions: 1

Final score: 11
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< 5 Anti-Sue/Stu
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26 < Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu

That was close to "borderline". I need to be careful with her.

Work in progress:

:bulletpurple: Obscura page 41
:bulletpurple: Bipolar painting Upper half almost done
:bulletpurple: Celestial Beasts painting Background done
:bulletpurple: Masks painting background done
:bulletpurple: That old painting of Pyramid Head
:bulletpurple: Splice fanart Almost done
:bulletpurple: Myst IV: Revelation fanart
:bulletpurple: The Cell fanart

Stuff I'd like to do:

:bulletorange: Falconer painting
:bulletorange: Some more Fakemon
:bulletorange: 100 themes challenge
:bulletorange: Shaman King fanart

Friends

:iconmortiferi::iconfaeliscity::iconartoveli::iconmystery-voice::iconchiptheghost::icongrandeombre::iconexillior::icone-derby::iconavecmonpinceau::icon11x20::iconsinister-otaku::iconthorcx::iconuberlutra::iconkatyaaustin::iconkatanisk::iconallatwan::icondancinbelle::icondeadbarney::icondonatien1740::icongehnloa::iconhtilden42::iconkefrith::iconr-h-maclanahan::icontariamofthepez::iconcarneeval::iconsatoripangea::iconzetrystan::iconlord-darkmore:

Clubs I'm in

:icondark-arts-asylum::iconmagicthegatherer::iconworld-imaginary::iconmystical-art-club::iconsilent-hill-club::iconlove-the-townshend::iconits-all-in-ur-head::iconagesofmyst::iconsilentrestlessdreams::iconthe-grower::iconmyst-fanclub::icongalerian-anomalies::iconcradle-of-forest::iconmelancholy-requiem:


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:iconrowein:
Wow, thank you very much for the feature!!
I feel honored :bow:
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:iconjohannesviii:
~JohannesVIII Mar 1, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome!
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:iconmarourin:
Thank you so much for featuring me!
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:iconjohannesviii:
~JohannesVIII Feb 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome!
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:iconallatwan:
~Allatwan Feb 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow- on dirait un costume de pretre! O_o
Super! Fati n'est pas une Mary-Sue (eu, le terme existe-t-il en français?)!
Bien que je ne la connaisse pas bien, tes dessins d'elle et de son monde me plaisent vraiment! Je suis contente qu'elle ai eu bon à ce "test"! ^^
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~JohannesVIII Feb 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Les fringues d'Akabane? Un costume de prêtre? Euuuuuh j'y avais pas pensé mais un peu, ouais, ça ressemble.
Sauf que c'est un ex-docteur désormais devenu transporteur et spécialisé dans l'assassinat :meow:

C'est l'association chez Fati de sa certaine instabilité + de ses pouvoirs latents qui me faisait un peu flipper, je suis contente moi aussi qu'elle ne tombe pas dans l'excès.
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:iconallatwan:
~Allatwan Feb 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Je ne sais pas, c'est juste qu'il me rappelle un prêtre intégriste de mon ancien lycée catho-dingue qui me faisait flipper. Sauf que lui, il avait une cape dorée avec des gallons en plus ><
Mais sérieusement, un ancien docteur devenu transporteur et spécialiste de l'assassinat... waow! Un sacré personnage! (oh mince, un jeux de mot à deux balles... ><)
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:iconjohannesviii:
~JohannesVIII Feb 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bah maintenant le prêtre en question te fera encore plus flipper, mdr.
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:iconallatwan:
~Allatwan Feb 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Heureusement que je ne le vois plus >_>
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*donatien1740 Feb 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats that Fati is not a Sue!
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